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English party
发布时间:2013-11-15 22:06:04 作者:赖晓敏  发布者:laixiaomin6666 浏览次数:3096  类别:英文作文   优秀指数:
[大学一年级] 广东省 >> 广州市 >> 从化市 >> 江埔街


  When the new year is coming, we congratulate the year of 2006 and to meet the Student  Union about English salon and the Department Foreign of the Xingwang college.. We welcome everyone to take part in our welcomed new year party warmly. All the students in the Department of Foreign going to contribute the wonderful English performance. In addition, they will prepare the fruits and snacks which let you feel comfortable and happy so that think high of you and feel you are warm.

  All the students welcome to you to enter their happy party because they want to have a beautiful day. In summary, let us congratulate the first day of 2007 which is bright and sunny altogether.

  Besides, please remember the time ,please arrive on December 12th,2006 on the Room 300 in arts training center.

                   The host:

                   English salon and the Department Foreign of the Xingwang college

 

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  • 批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
    批改时间:2013/11/16 21:02:42
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      When the new year is coming, we congratulate (say goodbye to)the year of 2006 and to meet (have a get-tegether with)the Student Union about English salon and the Department Foreign (International Department)of the Xingwang college.We warmly welcome everyone to take part in our welcomed (active)new year party warmly. All the students in the Department of Foreign (International Department)are going to contribute (show you)the wonderful English performance. In addition, they will prepare the fruits and snacks which let you feel comfortable and happy so that think high (highly)of you and feel as if you are warm(were at home).

      All the students welcome to you to enter their happy party because they want to have a beautiful (wonderful)day. In summary, let us congratulate (celebrate)the first day of 2007 which is bright and sunny altogether.

      Besides, please remember the time ,please arrive on December 12th,2006 on the Room 300 in (the)arts training center.

                       The host:

                       English salon and the Department Foreign (International Department)of the Xingwang college

    “辞别2006”say goodbye to the year 2006,“外联部”没有准确翻译,这里推测是该校国际部“international department”,“对……评价很高”think highly of…,“美好的一天”a wonderful/enjoyable day,“办聚会”have a get-tegether。

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