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发布时间：2013-11-16 19:58:51 作者：钟如雪  发布者：zhongruxue 浏览次数：2930  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

Hello!My name is Zhong Ruxue.l'm Chinese.My last name is Zhong.My first name is Ruxue.I don't have an English name.My phone number is 15254916360.l like green.l have a good friend.She's very beautiful. She is Xiang Mengyao.Xiang is her last name and Mengyao is her last name. She doesn't have an English name. She like Purple. We are in the same school,but is not a classmate. I was 8, she was 10.

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  批改时间：2013/11/16 20:31:29
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  Hello!My name is Zhong Ruxue.l'm Chinese.My last name is Zhong.My first name is Ruxue.I don't have an English name.My phone number is 15254916360.l like green.l have a good friend.She's very beautiful. She is Xiang Mengyao.Xiang is her last name and Mengyao is her last (first)name. She doesn't have an English name. She like Purple. We are in the same school,but is not a classmate. I was (am)8, she was (is)10.

  famliy name,last name surname均可表示“姓”，写作文如果是对过去事情叙述用过去时态外，一般用现在时。