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英语作文--一封回信

发布时间：2013-11-17 21:52:57 作者：颜廷毅  发布者：qfyty 浏览次数：4068  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

要求：下面是大明定给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开关已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?

Yours,

Daming

 

 

Dear Daming,

I know your problem. I’m very pleasure to answer your question. I have to say that you did wrong this time. First at all, you should use other’s things without their permission---it would make they feel unhappy. Do you think so? Second, you shouldn’t conceal the truth. Now I think you should say sorry to her sincerely and buy a new pen for her. I believe her will excuse you. I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Tom

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  要求：下面是大明定给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开关已给出，不计入总词数。

  Dear Tom,

  My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?

  Yours,

  Daming

   

   

  Dear Daming,

  ^{Thanks for your last e-mail and from it} I know your problem^{you have met a big problem}. I’m very ^{It's a great} pleasure to answer your question ^{help you to solve the problem}. I have to say that you did wrong this time. First at ^of all, you should ^not  use other’s things without their permission---it would make they ^them feel unhappy. Do you think so? Second, you shouldn’t conceal the truth. Now I think you should say sorry to her sincerely and buy a new pen for her. I believe her ^she will excuse ^forgive you. I hope my advice can help you.

  Yours,

  Tom

                点评：这种为朋友提供建议型的英语作文在中考中常会出现，这种文章对初中生来说难度还是有的，这需要记住一些基本句式，多看一些相关文章的范文也会起到不错的作用。