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Mrs Jones'Clothes Store Sale

发布时间：2014-01-10 21:13:20 作者：钟如雪  发布者：zhongruxue 浏览次数：3724  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★★★

    Come to buy clothes at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store! We sell trousers for noly 26 yuan each pair.Do you like sweaters? We have sweaters in all colors for noly 29 yuan erch.Do you need socks?  You can buy nice socks for noly 2 yuan each pair.Anybody can afford our prices.

   Come and see for yourself at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store!  

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2014/1/11 13:41:13
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  Come to buy clothes at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store! We sell trousers for noly 26 yuan each pair.

  Do you like sweaters? We have sweaters in all colors for noly 29 yuan for erch.(each)

  Do you need socks?  You can buy nice socks for noly 2 yuan each pair.Anybody can afford our prices.

  Come and see for yourself at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store!

• 批改教师：杜宝红 ( 山东省 >> 泰安市 >> 岱岳区 >> 泰山菁华双语学校 )
  批改时间：2014/1/15 18:08:16
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  Come to buy clothes at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store! We sell trousers for noly  ^only 26 yuan each pair.Do you like sweaters? We have sweaters in all colors for noly ^only 29 yuan erch ^each.Do you need socks?  You can buy nice socks for noly ^only 2 yuan each pair.Anybody can afford our prices.

  Come and see for yourself at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store!

• 批改教师：徐慧 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 临沂第二十中学 )
  批改时间：2014/5/11 15:32:58
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      Come to buy clothes at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store! We sell trousers for noly 26 yuan each pair.Do you like sweaters? We have sweaters in all colors for noly 29 yuan erch.Do you need socks?  You can buy nice socks for noly 2 yuan each pair.Anybody can afford our prices.

     Come and see for yourself at Mrs Jones'Clothes Store!