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My favourite sport

发布时间：2014-02-10 21:07:49 作者：白钰  发布者：bailongmei 浏览次数：3573  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★

  生命在于运动，运动是大家感兴趣的话题。请以“My favourite sport" 为题写一篇英语短文。写出你喜欢的运动是什么，这种运动有哪些特点，做这些运动有什么益处。你为什么感兴趣，以及你所喜欢的运动员是谁等。

    My favourite sport is suimming and running,they are very easy, The swimming sports it's very good,It's better for our legs.The legs can become long .The running sports is good for our legs too, but it is a little difficult than    suirmming.Because you must do hovdit.My fauourit athletes are Guo jingjing and Fu ming xia.They are very good.

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  生命在于运动，运动是大家感兴趣的话题。请以“My favourite sport" 为题写一篇英语短文。写出你喜欢的运动是什么，这种运动有哪些特点，做这些运动有什么益处。你为什么感兴趣，以及你所喜欢的运动员是谁等。

  My favourite sport is suimming (swimming)and running,they are very easy, The swimming sports it's  (is) very good,It's better (good) for our legs.The legs (They)can become long .The running sports is good for our legs too, but it is a little (more) difficult than suirmming(swimming).Because you must do hovdit.My fauourit athletes are Guo jingjing and Fu ming xia.They are very good.

  白钰同学要好好背单词了，此外写文章还要注意恰当运用代词，比较级的用法也要巩固一下。

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  生命在于运动，运动是大家感兴趣的话题。请以“My favourite sport" 为题写一篇英语短文。写出你喜欢的运动是什么，这种运动有哪些特点，做这些运动有什么益处。你为什么感兴趣，以及你所喜欢的运动员是谁等。

  My favourite sport is suimming ^swimming and running,they are very easy, The swimming sports it's ^is very good,It's better for our legs.The legs can become long ^strong .The running sports is good for our legs ,too, but it is a little difficult than   suimming ^swimming .Because you must do hovdit ^{it hard} .My fauourit  ^favorite athletes are Guo jingjing ^Jingjing  and Fu ming xia ^Mingxia.They are very good.