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发布时间：2014-02-17 15:46:05 作者：白钰  发布者：bailongmei 浏览次数：2763  类别：中文作文  

请根据下面表格所列交通工具的特点，写一篇70词左右的短文

 

Means of transportion	Characteristics
Plane	Fast,expensive
Train	Fast,carry many people and things
Ship	Cheap,slow,carry many people and things
Bus	Cheap,good for a short distance journey

    The Means of transportation is very characteristics.The plane is a fast way

but it is much expensive .The train is fast way too, it concarny many people and things.The ship is a cheep way and it is slow,but it can carry many peple and things.The bus is a cheapest way, it's good for a short distance journey.

 

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  批改时间：2014/2/18 9:57:56
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  请根据下面表格所列交通工具的特点，写一篇70词左右的短文

  
  

  Means of transportion	Characteristics
  Plane	Fast,expensive
  Train	Fast,carry many people and things
  Ship	Cheap,slow,carry many people and things
  Bus	Cheap,good for a short distance journey

  The Means of transportation is very characteristics.The plane is a fast way

  but it is much (very) expensive .The train is fast way too, it concarny (can carry) many people and things.The ship is a cheep (cheap) way and it is slow,but it can carry many peple and things.The bus is a cheapest way, it's good for a short distance journey.

  much后面加比较级，way表示方式，可以说“乘飞机（火车、轮船等）是一种快捷方式”而不能说“飞机（火车、轮船等）是一种快捷方式”。