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发布时间：2014-02-17 16:27:54 作者：白钰  发布者：bailongmei 浏览次数：2759  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★★

          请根据表格内容写一篇介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁的英语短文。70词左右 

               

Name:zhang Yining

Date of Birth:1982.10.5

Birthplace:Beijing

Height:1.68m

1986He:started to play table tennis 1991:joined the Beijing table tennis team 1993:joined the national table tennis team 1998: became a ping-pong champion 2004:won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens 2005:won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

                       Famous  ping-pong player

    In  china, we have a Famous ping-pong player -zhang yining.He was born in1982.10.5.He was born in Beijing.He is 1.68m tall.In1986 , He started to play table tennis .In 1991,Hejoined the Beijing table tennis team.In 1993,He

  joined the national table tennis team.In 1998,He became a ping-pong champion.In 2004,He won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens.In 2005.He won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

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  请根据表格内容写一篇介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁的英语短文。70词左右

  Name:zhang Yining

  Date of Birth:1982.10.5

  Birthplace:Beijing

  Height:1.68m

  1986He:started to play table tennis 1991:joined the Beijing table tennis team 1993:joined the national table tennis team 1998: became a ping-pong champion 2004:won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens 2005:won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

  Famous  ping-pong player

  In  china, we have a Famous ping-pong player -zhang yining(Zhang Yining). He (She) was born in1982.10.5.He (She) was born in Beijing.He (She) is 1.68m tall. In1986 , He (She) started to play table tennis .In 1991,He (She) joined the Beijing table tennis team.In 1993,He (She) joined the national table tennis team.In 1998,He (She) became a ping-pong champion.In 2004,He (She) won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens.In 2005.He (She) won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

  张怡宁是国家女子乒乓球队的著名队员。

  
  

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  请根据表格内容写一篇介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员张怡宁的英语短文。70词左右

  Name:zhang Yining

  Date of Birth:1982.10.5

  Birthplace:Beijing

  Height:1.68m

  1986He:started to play table tennis 1991:joined the Beijing table tennis team 1993:joined the national table tennis team 1998: became a ping-pong champion 2004:won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens 2005:won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

  Famous  ping-pong player

  In  china, we have(There  is) a Famous ping-pong player -zhang yining.(Yi  ning).He was born in(on)1982.10.5.He was born in Beijing.He is 1.68m tall.In1986 , He started to play table tennis .In 1991,Hejoined the Beijing table tennis team.In 1993,He

  joined the national table tennis team.In 1998,He became a ping-pong champion.In 2004,He won two gold medals at the 28th Olympic Games in Athens.In 2005.He won two gold medals  at the 48th Word Table Tennis Championship

   
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