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My rules

发布时间：2014-03-22 12:51:41 作者：钟如雪  发布者：zhongruxue 浏览次数：4495  类别：英文作文  

Can you help me? l have too many rules. My parents are very strict.Because l have so many family rules.On weekend,I get up  at six.After that.I have to make my bed. l have to clean my room.l can't play with my friends. l can't play computer games  because l must do my homework.l must wear clean clothes. After dinner,l can't  relax either. l have to practice the piano.l must read a book before  l can watch TV. But l have to go to bed before 9:00.  Look!This is a great school,but there are a lot of rules.Don't be late for class.This is very important.We always have to wear the school uniform.We also have to be quiet in the library.  Don't run in the hallways.Don't listen to music  in class.But we can listen to music in the music room.  We can't fight. We must listen to the teacher. We can't be noisy.In English class, we must speak English. We must come to school every day.l think it's best to follow the rules,because they can help us.
   （要求：家庭规则、学校规则和班级规则结为一体。）

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  批改时间：2014/3/23 12:05:50
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  Can you help me? l have too many rules. My parents are very strict.Because l have so many family rules.On （At）weekend,I get up at six.After that.I have to make my bed. l have to clean my room.l can't play with my friends. l can't play computer games because l must do my homework.l must wear clean clothes. After dinner,l can't relax either. l have to practice the piano.l must read a book before  l can watch TV. But l have to go to bed before 9:00. Look!This is a great school,but there are a lot of rules.Don't be late for class.This is very important.We always have to wear the school uniform.We also have to be quiet in the library. Don't run in the hallways.Don't listen to music in class.But we can listen to music in the music room. We can't fight. We must listen to the teacher. We can't be noisy.In English class, we must speak English. We must come to school every day.l think it's best to follow the rules,because they can help us.
  

  （要求：家庭规则、学校规则和班级规则结为一体。）

  注意一下，大写的“I”与小写的“l”的区别。同时这样的规则为你们好，帮你们养成好习惯，到20岁以后你会发现受益良多。