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My busy weekend

发布时间：2014-03-30 12:58:13 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：2896  类别：英文作文  

Hi,this is Chen Yongjuan.I'm going to have a busy weekend!

On Saturday,I'm going to do homewark in thr morning.Then,in the afternoon.I'm going to the bookstore.I'm going to buy some story-books.

On Sunday,I'm going to the supermarket with my mother.We're going after lunch.Then,in the afternoon.I'm going to visit my anut with my mother.We are going after dinner.Then,we are going to watch TV together.That will be fun!What about you?What are you going to do on the weekend?

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  Hi,this is ^I'm Chen Yongjuan.I'm going to have a busy weekend!

  On Saturday,I'm going to do homewark in thr  ^the morning.Then,in the afternoon,I'm going to the bookstore.I'm going to buy some story-books.

  On Sunday,I'm going to the supermarket with my mother.We're going after lunch.Then,in the afternoon.I'm going to visit my anut ^aunt with my mother.We are going after dinner.Then,we are going to watch TV together.That will be fun!What about you?What are you going to do on the weekend?