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My Family

发布时间：2014-04-27 10:40:30 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：2757  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

They are 4 people in my family.My mother is 40 years old.She is short.My father is 41 years old.He is strong and tall.I'm 12 years old.I am younger than my mother and father.My sister is 19 years old.My father is taller than me.My mother is heavier than me.My sister is older than me.My father is stronger than me .My mather's hair is shorter than my hair.My sister's hair is longer than my hair.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2014/4/27 15:43:04
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  They are 4 people in my family.My mother is 40 years old.She is short.My father is 41 years old.He is strong and tall.I'm 12 years old.I am younger than my mother and father.My sister is 19 years old.My father is taller than me.My mother is heavier than me.My sister is older than me.My father is stronger than me .My mather's hair is shorter than my hair(mine).My sister's hair is longer than my hair(mine).

  Comment: How tall is your sister?

• 批改教师：郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
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  They are 4 people in my family.My mother is 40 years old.She is short.My father is 41 years old.He is strong and tall.I'm 12 years old.I am younger than my mother and father.My sister is 19 years old.My father is taller than me.My mother is heavier than me.My sister is older than me.My father is stronger than me .My mather's hair is shorter than my hair.My sister's hair is longer than my hair.

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  很条理，能把学到的句式运用到自己的英语作文中，赞一个！加油！