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On-Line Friends

发布时间：2014-05-03 12:00:52 作者：颜廷毅  发布者：qfyty 浏览次数：2481  类别：中文作文  

作文要求：人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于中学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

      赞成的理由                                反对的理由

1.广交朋友                                     1.  浪费时间

2.可自由表达思想                            2.影响学习

3.利于外语学习                               3.可能上当受骗

 

注意：文章必须包括表格中的全面内容；词数不少于80；参考词汇：网络朋友:on-line friend 上当受骗：be cheated

Now many teenagers like to make friends in the internet. They think making friends in the internet can make more friends and show up their minds freely. Some students even believe that making on-line friends is good for studying foreign language. But many people against making on-line friends. They believe making on-line friends will not only wastes time but also get in the way of studying. Some parents also worry about their children may be cheated by their on-line friends. I think making on-line friends isn't a good way to make friends or study. I think making friends in the true world is better, because it's more realistic than making on-line friends.

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  作文要求：人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于中学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

  赞成的理由                                反对的理由

  1.广交朋友                                     1.  浪费时间

  2.可自由表达思想                            2.影响学习

  3.利于外语学习                               3.可能上当受骗

  
  

  注意：文章必须包括表格中的全面内容；词数不少于80；参考词汇：网络朋友:on-line friend 上当受骗：be cheated

  Now many teenagers like to make friends in (on) the internet. They think ^that making friends in the internet ^they can make more friends and show up (share) their minds (ideas) freely. Some students even believe that making on-line friends is good for studying foreign language. But many people against making on-line friends(that). They believe (consider that) making on-line friends will (is) not only wastes (a waste of) time but also get in the way of studying. Some parents also worry about (that) their children may be cheated by their on-line friends. I think making on-line friends isn't a good way to make friends (living) or study^ing. I think making friends in the true (real) world is better, because it's more realistic than making on-line friends.

  Comment: Each English word has its own usage. Their order must match native's logic. So try to use different word to express the same meaning.