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my teacher

发布时间：2014-05-05 23:44:10 作者：若拙  发布者：ruozhuo 浏览次数：2632  类别：中文作文  

Today morning I met a teacher on line.she is not only a helpful but also rich knowledge.I like her very much.I felled relax to listen her lesson.what a nice teacher she is !

now I want to learn English with her ,but i am a poor.I have lost my work.so I pay cost of study English.i wish more teacher can help me .in fact ,I try to write in English.so I come here tonight.Dear teacher,Do you think i can finish my drem? I look forward to your early reply .

thank you very much. please you help me check  wrong in my article

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  Today morning I met a teacher on line ^{in the morning}.she is not only a helpful but also rich knowledge(knowledgable) I like her very much.I felled (felt) relax to listen her lesson(when I was listening to her lesson).what a nice teacher she is !

  now I want to learn English with (from) her ,but i am a poor(my English is so poor).I have lost my work.so I pay cost of study English.i (I)wish more teacher can help me .in fact ,I try to write in English.so I come here tonight.Dear teacher,Do you think i (I)can finish (achieve) my drem(dream)?I ^am look^ing forward to your early reply.

  thank you very much. please you help me check wrong in my article

  Comment: It is a hard job to learn English. Keep going and never give up. Your dream will come true sooner or later.