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Let the classics be classics
发布时间:2014-05-06 23:02:27 作者:周土娣  发布者:3120921012 浏览次数:5759  类别:英文作文  
[大学一年级] 广东省 >> 广州市 >> 白云区 >> 人和镇


With the development of the economy, now many people maintain different attitudes to the classic. On the one hand, some people hold the view that the classics are classics because they have stood the test of time. Therefore, they are to be treasured by people of all generations, ours being no exception. Modern people should continue to be the classical heritage. However, on the other hand, many people believe that the classics represent the wisdom of the past. As we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature. They think that for classic we don't need a lot of attention, we should be looking to the future, more attention to the present or future things.

I agreed the opinion that the classics are classics because they have stood the test of time. As during the long human beings history, each generation could learn something from the previous classics and help us to understand the value, customs and history of that time. For example, we could know the prosperity of Tang Dynasty by reading the poem of Li Bai. But of course we have the responsibility to create our understanding of man and nature, in order to generate the classics of our own generation, which should be left to next generation to treasure.

In my view, the classic are also important. After all, many classic also represents a lot of things now.  Classic is called classic, but because it contains a variety of characteristics. As during the long human beings history, each generation could learn something from the previous classics and help us to understand the value, customs and history of that time. For example, we could know the prosperity of Tang Dynasty by reading the poem of Li Bai. There is no denying that classic works on behalf of the past, but with the development of economy and civilization, the wisdom in our future path will still play an important role. This should be the reason that human being always moves forward.

However, what role do habits play in your life? First and foremost, we should continue to save the classics and should read more classics. The more classics you read, the more knowledge you get. Of course, we need to keep pace with the times instead of adopting the classics blindly. Besides, we have got to read classics, to enlarge our scope, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. Last but not least, the classics represent the past wisdom.

 

In conclusion, it is worth of collecting a classic. Admittedly, it’s our responsibility to explore the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature. Let us join hands to let the classics be classics.

 

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    With the development of the economy(soceity),now many people maintain different attitudes to the classic. (the classics are different in many people's views).On the one hand, some people hold the view that the classics are classics because they have stood the test of time. Therefore, they are to be treasured by people of all generations, ours being no exception. Modern people should continue to be the classical heritage. However, on the other hand, many people believe that the classics represent the wisdom of the past. As we are advancing towards the future, it is our responsibility to venture into the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature. They think that for classic we don't need a lot of attention, we should be looking to the future, more attention to the present or future things.

    I agreed the opinion that the classics are classics because they have stood the test of time. As during the long human beings history, each generation could learn something from the previous classics and help us to understand the value, customs and history of that time. For example, we could know the prosperity of the Tang Dynasty by reading the poem of Li Bai. But of course we have the responsibility to create our understanding of man and nature, in order to generate (createthe classics of our own generation, which should be left to the next generation to treasure.

    In my view, the classic are (is) also important. After all, many classic also represents a lot of things now.  Classic is called classic, but because it contains a variety of characteristics. As during the long human beings history, each generation could learn something from the previous classics and help us to understand the value, customs and history of that time. For example, we could know the prosperity of the Tang Dynasty by reading the poem of Li Bai. There is no denying that classic works on behalf of the past, but with the development of economy and civilization, the wisdom in our future path will still play an important role. This should be the reason that human being always moves forward.

    However, what role do habits play in your life? First and foremost, we should continue to save the classics and should read more classics. The more classics you read, the more knowledge you get(aqcuire).Of course, we need to keep pace with the times instead of adopting (adapting) the classics blindly. Besides, we have got to read classics, to enlarge our scope, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. Last but not least, the classics represent the past wisdom.


    In conclusion, it is worth of collecting a classic. Admittedly, it’s our responsibility to explore the unknown and generate new understanding of man and nature. Let us join hands to let the classics be classics.


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