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My sister

发布时间：2014-05-09 21:47:39 作者：钟如雪  发布者：zhongruxue 浏览次数：2977  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

Look!This is a picture of my sister,Alice.She is 6-year-old.Let me tell you what she look like.First of all,She is do medium height with straight and bloude hair.She has two big eyes and a small mouth.She 's kind of thin.She wears a white shirt,a pair of jeans and a pair of black sports shoes.I like her because she is really smart,beautiful and very cute.She is good at play the piano. 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2014/5/9 22:06:10
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  Look!This is a picture of my sister,Alice.She is 6-year-old.Let me tell you what she look^s like.First of all,She is (has)do medium height with straight and bloude hair.She has two big eyes and a small mouth.She 's kind of (a little) thin.She wears a white shirt,a pair of jeans and a pair of black sports shoes.I like her because she is really smart,beautiful and very cute.She is good at play^ing the piano.
• 批改教师：徐慧 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 临沂第二十中学 )
  批改时间：2014/5/11 15:14:29
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  Look!This is a picture of my sister,Alice.She is 6-year-old.Let me tell you what she look like.First of all,She is do medium height with straight and bloude blondehair.She has two big eyes and a small mouth.She 's kind of thin.She wears a white shirt,a pair of jeans and a pair of black sports shoes.I like her because she is really smart,beautiful and very cute.She is good at play the piano.