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I like Light music

发布时间：2014-05-16 23:43:45 作者：张池  发布者：huashuicici 浏览次数：3268  类别：英文作文  

                        I like  Light  music

       I can not remember when I liked  to listen to Light music. But Light music gives me many courages to face difficulties and bear pain, so Light music is  important for me .

       At first, I just listened to light music played by the piano, with the increasing interests, I found that Light music was played by many varieties instruments . Such as the piano , the violin ,the guitar  and so on . And Light music is also played by traditional instruments, for example , the 4-string Chinese lute , or  the 21-or 25-string plucked instrument, etc. I think that Light music is so soft  interesting or pleasant to listen to. It is not only  to appreciate but also to cultivate one's original nature.  My favorite Light music is played by the Piano , the Violin or the PiPa , when I listen to it , it would make me keep calm and think in silent . Gradually , I would turn to be fine and feel emotion inthe light music  which was  expresses musician's thought . So I love  listen to Light music when I was both happy or unhappy! 

      When I was unhappy or lonely ,I think light music was my best friend who share my sad and lonely.  And it let me went into a silent world .

Sometimes , when I was sleepless, I often listen to light music and went to asleep. Because I think it as a lullaby , so in my eyes Light music is  so important for me.

       Light music is also precious with the age of change ,and because it turn to more value and more classic. I hope one day I can go to listen a big light music concert.

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  I can not remember that I was how (when I liked) to like listen to Light music. But Light music gives me many encourages to face difficult (difficulties) and ^bear pain, so Light music is so important for me .

  At first, I just listened to piano light music ^{played by the pianos.} with my interesting became more and more stronger,(the increasing intrests) I found that Light music had (was played by) many varieties ^instruments Such as ^the piano light music, ^the violin light music and ^the guitar light music and so on . And Light music ^is also ^{played by} traditional element, (instruments) for example , it made of ^the 4-stringed Chinese lute or it made of  a ^the 21-or 25-stringed plucked instrument and so on.(,etc.)I think that Light music is so soft and interesting or pleasant to listen to. It is not only  to appreciate but ^also to cultivate one`s original nature.  My favorite Light music is made of (played by) ^the Piano , ^the Violin or ^the PiPa , when I listen to it , it would make me keep calm and thinking in silent , slow by slow (Gradually), I would turn to ^be fine and feel the ^{emotion in} light music emotion which was how to expresses musician^'s emotion (thought) and songs meaning inside. So I love  listen to Light music when I was ^both happy or (and) unhappy.

  When I was unhappy or lonely ,I think light music was my best friend which (who) share my sad and lonely, I also share their happy and sad.  And it let me went into a silent world .

  Sometimes , when I was sleeplessness, I often listen to light music and with it went to asleep. Because I think it as a lullaby , so in my eyes Light music is  so important for someone.(me)

  Light music is also precious with the age of change (change of age),and because it turns to ^be more value and more classic. I hope one day I can go to listen ^to a big light music concert.

  
  

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