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发布时间：2014-05-22 22:32:57 作者：liuling  发布者：1501621730 浏览次数：2957  类别：英文作文  

Dear Tom,

 I am Li hua,the monitor from Class Three.When we herd the news that you will come back t your country at the end of year.Wedecide to hold a evening party to express our thanks and hope you can take party in the party.

 On the tommrow evening,Near the school,there is a room where can do some activities.For example,some students  want to sing for you,some students want to learn something about your country ,also,everyone hope you cab eat foods with us.

 Dear Tom,although we did not stay together for a long time,we really like you.We hope you can take party yi the party.

                                                                                                                                                   Youes,

                                                                                                                                                    Li hua

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  Dear Tom,

  I am Li hua,the monitor from Class Three.When we herd (heard) the news that you will come back t (to) your country at the end of year.We decide to hold a evening party to express our thanks and hope you can take party in the party.

  On (In) the tommrow evening,Near the school,there is a room ^{near the school} where ^we can do some activities.For example,some students want to sing for you,some students (and the other) want to learn something about your country ,also,everyone hope you cab (can) eat foods (together) with us.

  Dear Tom,although we did not stay together for a long time,we really like you.We hope you can take party yi (in) the party.

  Youes,

  Li hua