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My holiday pian
发布时间:2014-06-06 18:46:05 作者:李佳 发布者:lijia 浏览次数:2752 类别:英文作文
[小学六年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇木作小学
I'm going to Linyi on my holiday.I'm going to take pictures and ate good food. I'm going on next weekend.I'm going to by car. I'm so happy!
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I'm going go to Linyi on my holiday.I'm going to take pictures and ate (eat) good food. I'm going to set off on next weekend.I'm going to (there) by car. I'm so happy!