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my opinions on dieting

发布时间：2012-09-18 23:12:36 作者：王凡  发布者：wangfansunflower 浏览次数：3676  类别：中文作文  

 there is an common phenomenon that many people ,especially women ,are being on diet .what gives rise to this phenomenon ? I think there are two mainly reasons

first ,with the growth in the living standard.people eat better and better .so someone who has a bad living habit would become fatter and fatter .then they begin to go on diet to lose weight.second ,some girls are strict with their firgure.they hope they will look beautiful ,therefore they choose to lose weight by eating less and even no dinner.

however,does diet work for weight loss? I don't think so.studies present that being on diet could control the weight temporarily .bur it does harm to our health in the long run .it would  reduce the immune system  and even lead to anemia.

so I suggest that people should be reasonable to go on a diet ,such as reducing the food intake suitably .and it's best to far away from the diet .

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   there is an common There is a common phenomenon that many people ,especially women ,are being on a diet,especially women.what What gives rise to this phenomenon ? I think there are two mainly reasons.

  first ,with the growth in the living standard.First, as living standards rise, people eat better and better,so someone who has a bad living habit would become fatter and fatter .then and they begin to go on a diet to lose weight.second Second,some girls are strict with their firgure in their figure.they They hope they will look beautiful ,therefore they choose to lose weight by eating less and even no dinner.don’t eat or eat less to lose weight.

  however,does diet work for weight loss? However, can diet reduce weight?

  I don't think so.studies present that being on Studies show that diet could control the weight temporarily .bur it does harm to our health in the long run .In the long run, it is harmful to our health.it It would  reduce the immune system  and even lead to anemia.so I suggest that people should be reasonable to go on a diet have good diet,such as reducing the food intake suitably, .and it's best to far away from the diet . and  would better not go no a diet.