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saving money

发布时间：2012-09-24 21:00:41 作者：代雪莹  发布者：jilian 浏览次数：7368  类别：中文作文  

Do you have the experience you think that is a hard work for people to save money?Yes,i do.Especially when compared with spending money,i will consider the money as the water flowing into the river.What's more,i couldn't imagine that how large the difference is between the spending money and saving money.As we are students and because of the economic in common families,sometimes i think it is necessary to save money.

Indeed saving money is not a easy job to accomplish.It should last for a long time to save enough money.I like saving money which is difficult for my family, so i have to do some things to save money.Certainly it is probably life that will be hard.I take it as the a practice of me,i wish saving money could be one virtue of mine in the future life.What's more,now facing my present situation,i find it hard for me to spend money happily,what is more important for me is to save money and reduce to buiden for family.Sometimes i also admire others who are rich could buy good and so on,but after a long time,i know the meaning of life is not that how much you have,but the happiness in your life in my opinion.

Since i went to high school,from then on,i had been in the school for 3 years.At that time, i had to scheme the money by myself,which as a hard job for me, how could be the limited money be saved?First,i should learn to control myself about good things in heart.Second,i cut the times to go shopping.Third,looking for a girlfriend would not come true in the high school.Besides,i also didn't want to ask for money from family.Everyone has his situation in their life.Maybe you have better ways to save money.

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  Do you have the experience you think that it is a hard work for people to save money?Yes,i I do.Especially when compared with spending money,especially comparing it with spending money.i I will consider the money as the water flowing into the river.What's more,i I couldn't imagine that how large the difference is between the spending money and saving money.As we are students and because of the economic in common families,sometimes i I think it is necessary to save money.

  Indeed saving money is not a easy job to accomplish.It should last for a long time to save enough money.I like saving money which is difficult for my family, so i have to do some things to save money.Certainly it is probably life that will be hard.I take it as the a practice of me,i wish saving money could be one virtue of mine in the future life.What's more,now facing my present situation,i find it hard for me to spend money happily,what is more important for me is to save money and reduce to buiden for family.Sometimes i also admire others who are rich could buy good and so on,but after a long time,i know the meaning of life is not that how much you have,but the happiness in your life in my opinion.

  Since i went to high school,from then on,i had been in the school for 3 years.At that time, i had to scheme the money by myself,which as a hard job for me, how could be the limited money be saved?First,i should learn to control myself about good things in heart.Second,i cut the times to go shopping.Third,looking for a girlfriend would not come true in the high school.Besides,i also didn't want to ask for money from family.Everyone has his situation in their life.Maybe you have better ways to save money.