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Dragon Boat Festival

发布时间：2012-10-02 16:48:26 作者：赵利娇  发布者：mierl 浏览次数：3492  类别：中文作文  

    Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival of China .It has a very famous origin , which is about a great man in Chinese history named QuYuan. QuYuan is an official very loyal to his sovereign , but he was framed up by some  traitor ministers and not  appreciated by his lord . Unfortunately, he commit suicided by jumping into miluo river to show his loyalty to his lovely nation .From then on ,people name that day as Dragong Boat Festival to honour him .

     Everytime we celebrate this festival by eating zongzi and hold dragon boat match , we show our strong respect and  support to QuYuan .Because we think he is our nation hero all the time and we can not forget him and his spirit. We also get a strong willing to carry on his patriotism and value of life .What's more ,we should respect and carry on our nation festivals ,and develop them ,and let them become more famous and globalized .

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/5 20:04:37
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      Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival of China .It has a very famous origin , which is about a great man in the Chinese history named QuYuan. QuYuan is an official very loyal to his sovereign , but he was framed up by some  traitor ministers and not  appreciated by his lord . Unfortunately, he commit suicided committed suicide by jumping into miluo river the Nile to show his loyalty to his lovely nation .From then on ,people name that day as Dragong Boat Festival to honour him .

       Everytime we celebrate this festival by eating zongzi and hold holding dragon boat match , we to show our strong respect and  support to QuYuan .Because we We think he is our nation national hero all the time and we can not forget him and his spirit. We also get a strong willing to carry on his patriotism and value of life .What's more ,we should respect and carry on our nation national festivals ,and develop them ,and let them become more famous and globalized .

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2013/3/3 13:35:21
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  Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival of China .It has a very famous origin , which is about a great man in the Chinese history named QuYuan. QuYuan is an official very loyal to his sovereign , but he was framed up by some  traitor ministers and not  appreciated by his lord . Unfortunately, he commit suicided committed suicide by jumping into miluo river the Nile to show his loyalty to his lovely nation .From then on ,people name that day as Dragong Boat Festival to honour him .

       Everytime we celebrate this festival by eating zongzi and hold holding dragon boat match , we to show our strong respect and  support to QuYuan .Because we We think he is our nation national hero all the time and we can not forget him and his spirit. We also get a strong willing to carry on his patriotism and value of life .What's more ,we should respect and carry on our nation national festivals ,and develop them ,and let them become more famous and globalized .

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