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change the unchangeable

发布时间：2014-09-21 12:58:22 作者：王艳  发布者：guahuoaibajie 浏览次数：3578  类别：英文作文  

     A new year, a new term, all new start. We also should be a new one that differs from the one in the past. Therefore, a new one should learn to change himself. We can't change the things of the world a lot. But when the world can't be changed, the only thing we can do is to change ourselves to survive from the world. If we insist on our opinions and doings, then we will discover that the world is changing because we are changing ourselves.

      In a word, changing the world must change ourselves.

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  A new year, a new term, all new start. We also should be a new one that differs from the one in the past. Therefore, a new one (he) should learn to change himself. We can't change the things of the world a lot. (Although there are many situations we can not change in the world) But when the world can't be changed, the only thing we can do is to change ourselves (attitudes) to survive from the world. If we insist on our opinions and doings (behaviors), then we will discover that the (everything) world is changing because we are changing ourselves (goes as we have thought before.)

  In a word, changing the world must change ourselves.