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发布时间：2012-10-03 20:38:44 作者：  发布者：Jane 浏览次数：3635  类别：中文作文  

 With the modern technology, our economy, our life, and the whole world have changed a lot. It can easily be witnessed that the modern technology, which is regarded as something related to science, has benefited us human so much that nearly all of us think it a brilliant invention. Nowadays, by the modern technology, we gain the ability to get energy from our planet and we find the way how the creature’s body conduct and changed the species in genetic degree, as well as rescuing human from kinds of disease. Furthermore, the modern technology is showing us what the outer space is about. All the developments are owing to the modern technology.

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   With the modern technology, our economy, our life,(后边有and逗号可去掉) and the whole world have changed a lot. It can easily be(俩单词调换顺序） witnessed that the modern technology, which is regarded as something related to science, has benefited us human so much that nearly all of us think it a brilliant invention. Nowadays, by the modern technology, we gain the ability to get energy from our planet and we find the way how the creature’s body conduct and changed the species in genetic degree, as well as rescuing human from kinds of disease. Furthermore, the modern technology is showing us what the outer space is about. All the developments are owing to the modern technology.

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   With the developement of the modern technology, our economy, our life, and even the whole world have changed a lot. It can easily be be easily witnessed that the modern technology, which is regarded as something related to science, has benefited us human so much that nearly all of us think it a brilliant invention. that the modern technology makes human benefit a lot.Nowadays, by with the modern technology, we gain the ability to get energy from our planet and we find the way how the creature’s body conduct and changed the species in genetic degree, as well as rescuing human from kinds of disease. Furthermore, the modern technology is showing us what the outer space is about. All the developments are owing to due to the modern technology.