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Welcome to school

发布时间：2014-09-29 19:26:23 作者：张啊  发布者：qwerasdf 浏览次数：3219  类别：英文作文  

teacher and the students. I have on behalf of school and school administration to welcome. Welcome to my school.

Dear students five days of camp life are short. Our foreign teachers not only to help the students to improve our English, but also bing their culture. Here and act as the each one of their culture. This is opportunity to enjoy of English culture to the students. In the morning, an English Coner will exchange of spoken English. A Serious of lecture about American culture will also be offered. In the afternoon, Student can choose to robot assembly. In the evening, we will come together to sing English songs or swimming, or playing games performing a drama for the English party in the final day.

Now, I would also like to show our great culture. Respect and deep appreciation to the foreign teacher, who has traveled thousands of miles to our school. Meanwhile, I would like to say thank you for all the official. Who supports our work all the time.

Here I declare the opening of the 2014 Robot summer camp!

Words that congratulate!

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  批改时间：2014/9/30 8:44:07
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  teacher (Professors) and the students (schoolmates) 

  I have (am) on behalf of school and school administration to welcome ^{you to our school}. Welcome to my school.

  Dear students five days of camp life are short. Our foreign teachers not only to help^ed the students to improve our English, but also bing (enrich) their culture. Here and act as the each one of their culture. This is ^an opportunity ^{for students} to enjoy (learn) of English culture to the students. In the morning, an English Coner (corner) will exchange of spoken English. A Serious of lecture about American culture will also be offered. In the afternoon, Student can choose to robot assembly. In the evening, we will come together to sing English songs or swimming, or playing games performing a drama for the English party in the final day. (an English drama for the party on the final day).

  Now, I would also like to show (share) our great culture. Respect (We respect) and deep^ly appreciation (appreciate) to the foreign teacher who has traveled thousands of miles to our school. Meanwhile, I would like to say thank you for all the official.(officers).Who (who) supports our work all the time.

  Here I declare the opening of the 2014 Robot summer camp!

  Words that congratulate!