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"The pursuit of happyness" about it

发布时间：2014-10-06 22:34:45 作者：张松  发布者：zs1225 浏览次数：2574  类别：中文作文  

What is happiness? This problem is the same as you ask what is the universe. In the heart of every man has his own happiness standards, as long as reach this standard, you are happy. The happiness of others is not necessarily what you want, and you own happiness doesn't useful to others. Happiness is selfish, only oneself can realize that a moment of pleasure.

In the film is about a very hard but still poor salesman, because the economic distress and he leaves his wife, but his son naively believe him. The last film, the hero through own extraordinary persistence and efforts, finally successful stockbroker became a special treatment.

Hero to get a famous company internship opportunities, carry to make a living all day sell 40 pounds of bone scanners at the company downstairs flap about more than a month. Him many holds a bachelor's degree in order to competitors in the left a deep impression to the company director, he is in the taxi to the boss to solveRubik's cube, but because they had no money to pay the fare and fled into the station. He was detained in the police station, because of the tax fair site preparation went to the company the next day.

He went to find that one stolen bone scanners and finally knocked down by a car crossing the road, he lost one shoe to go back to work in a company and going to the kindergarten son from school.

Was finally found the last a bone scan, it seems that China's dilemma can be solved, but because of machine fault cannot sell smoothly finally choose to sell blood life difficult.

Although very difficult, managed to "Ming " after a storm comes a month. The protagonist's hard work, good at manufacturing opportunities and grasp the opportunity, tough and optimistic character. All of these make me deeply moved.

Less lucky, create a heaven without a hint of the idol drama actor in the free and easy. Played by actor will Smith, is running his own goal, through the pay little by little, and finally gain the results they want.

Just like every classic movie classic lines are left behind, "the pursuit of happiness " also left us with a such a classic lines - "if You have a dream, so please protect it " (You gotta dream? You gotta protect it! ). Everyone has his own dream, some dreams come true, some people dream, to protect their own dreams, efforts to dream, the dream to insist, happiness will come knocking on your door.

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  What is happiness? This problem is the same as you ask what is the universe. In the heart of every man has his own happiness standards (standards on happiness) as long as reach this standard, you are happy. The happiness of others (Other's happiness) is not necessarily what (the one that) you want, and you own happiness doesn't useful to others. Happiness is selfish (can be shared and passed one by one) only oneself can realize that a moment of pleasure.

  In the film is about (There was a film telling) a very hard ^story but still (about a) poor salesman, because the economic distress and he leaves (was discarded by) his wife, but his son naively believe^d him. The last (At the end of) ^the film, the hero through (made) ^his own extraordinary persistence and efforts ^{on his carer}, ^and finally ^{became a} successful stockbroker became a special treatment.

  Hero to get (got) a famous company internship opportunities (opportunity) ^{in a famous company} carry to make a living all day. ^He sell (sold) 40 pounds of bone scanners at the company downstairs flap about more than a month. Him (He) many holds (held) a bachelor's degree in order to competitors in the left (leave) a deep^lyimpression^s to the company director^s, he is in the taxi to the boss to solve Rubik's cube, but because they had no money to pay the fare and fled into the station. He was detained in the police station, because of the tax fair site preparation went to the company the next day.

  He went to find that (the) one stolen bone scanners and finally knocked down by a car crossing (when he crossed) the road, he lost one shoe to go (and went) back to work in a company and going (He went) to the kindergarten son from school.

  Was finally found the last a bone scan, it seems that China's dilemma can be solved, but because of machine fault cannot sell smoothly finally choose to sell blood life difficult.

  Although ^{it was} very difficult, ^he managed to "Ming " after a storm comes a month. The protagonist's hard work, ^was good at manufacturing (creating) opportunities and grasp^ing the opportunity (them) tough and optimistic character. All of these make (those made) me deeply moved.

  Less lucky (Unfortunately) create (creating) a heaven without a hint of the idol drama actor in the free and easy. Played by actor will Smith, is running his own goal, through the pay little by little (affects step by step) and finally gain the results they want.

  Just like every classic movie classic lines are left behind, "the pursuit of happiness " also left us with a such a classic lines - "if You have a dream, so please protect it " (You gotta dream? You gotta protect it! ). Everyone has his own dream, some dreams come true, some people dream, to protect their own dreams, efforts to dream, the dream to insist, happiness will come knocking on your door.