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The benefits of learning English

发布时间：2014-10-08 21:29:57 作者：田暘  发布者：ty232001 浏览次数：4161  类别：英文作文  

As we all know, English is used all over the world. Many people acknowledge English as their mother language. For visitors, if they want to have a happy time in these English-speaking courntries, they should at know some oral English. Also, English can be used in our daliy life. For example, with the rapid compressing of commercial business, especially the electornic commerce, more and more skilled English speakers are needed. if we can speak English fluently , we may get much more opportunity in our study and work time. Besides,there was a study had informed that people who study both languages are more intellent. But the most important thing is , we will never feel embarrassed when we are asked by foreigeners. What is more , we have access to teach foreigners how to speak Chinese and tell them Chinese folk customs.

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  As we all know, English is used all over the world. Many people acknowledge English as their mother language ^{or the second language}. For visitors, if they want to have a happy time in these English-speaking courntries (countries), they should at know (are able to speak) some oral English. Also, English can be used in our daliy life. For example, with the rapid compressing of commercial business, especially the electornic (electronic) commerce, more and more skilled (qualified) English speakers are needed. if we can speak English fluently , we may get much more opportunity in our study and work time. Besides,there was a study (tendency) had informed that people who study both languages are more intellent (intelligent) .But the most important thing is , we will never feel embarrassed when we are asked by (talk to the) foreigeners (foreigners).What is more , we have access to teach foreigners how to speak Chinese and tell them Chinese folk customs.