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The Trend of Heading Back Home

发布时间：2014-11-04 21:03:15 作者：杨建颖  发布者：yangjianying2014 浏览次数：2660  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

Along with the advance of society more and more phenomenon are brought to our attention, one of which is that more and more graduates have a choice to head back home.

A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon. First of all, employment pressure is so heavy that graduates can't live well in the big city. In addition, the village offer graduates many opportunities in order encourage them to head back. More importantly, as the saying goes: a beggar can never be bankrupt. Heading back home maybe a better choice.

As to whether it is a blessing or a course, however, people take different attitudes. As far as I am concerned this phenomenon is squarely normal. And then graduates are supposed to make contributions to their hometown in order to thanks for bringing up them. Above all, there are so many advantages for heading back home and graduates should cherish this choice.

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  Along with the advance of society more and more phenomenon are brought to our attention, one of which is that more and more graduates have a choice to head back home.

  A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon. First of all, employment pressure is so heavy that graduates can't live well in the big city. In addition, the village offer graduates many opportunities in order ^to encourage them to head back. More importantly, as the saying goes: a beggar can never be bankrupt. Heading back home maybe a better choice.

  As to whether it is a blessing or a course, however, people take different attitudes. As far as I am concerned this phenomenon is squarely normal. And then graduates are supposed to make contributions to their hometown in order to thanks for (the land that) bringing (brings) up them. Above all, there are so many advantages for heading back home and graduates should cherish this choice.