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my goal

发布时间：2014-10-13 13:04:37 作者：李芳芳  发布者：361673 浏览次数：4533  类别：英文作文  

  My  goal

  I can’t forget the mood which can’t be expressed.when I enter in the college.university,for me,is a beautiful word which is full of dream..i wish to have a wonderful university life.

  So I set three goals to enlarge my long but short university life.first,I think leaning is still the most important thing.so I will study the major subject hard.second,,I hope that I can read enough books to enlarge my view.third, I wish I can make many friends by joining in lots of activities.

  In a word, university life is very interesting.there ara many things waiting for me to learn,and this is why I come here to be a university student.     《李芳芳》 英语1班

 

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  My  goal

  I can’t forget the mood which can’t be expressed.when I enter in the college.university,for me,is a beautiful word (world) which is full of dream..i wish to have a wonderful university life.

  So I set three goals to enlarge (enrich) my long but short university life.first,I think leaning is still the most important thing.so I will study the major subject hard.second,,I hope that I can read enough books to enlarge my view.(horizon).third, I wish I can make many friends by joining (taking part)in lots of activities.

  In a word, university life is very interesting.there ara many things waiting for me to learn,and this is why I come here to be a university student. 《李芳芳》 英语1班