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Smoking should be stopped in public places

发布时间：2014-10-17 17:10:44 作者：王雨  发布者：778496172 浏览次数：3453  类别：英文作文  

Many countries today have laws that prohibit smoking in some public places because it affects non smokers as well.In modern society, smoking has become a social issue. Some companies don’t allow their staff to smoke in the office, and even in certain countries, it is a ban that forbid smoking in all public places. Despite of depriving smokers of their freedom, I agree with that policy strongly.This damages their health corrode their will and could cause lung cancer.Therefore, it is a constructive idea to ban smoking in public places.

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  Many countries today have laws that prohibit smoking in ^some public places because it affects non smokers as well.In modern society, smoking has become a social issue. Some companies don’t allow their staff smoking (to smoke) in the office, and even in certain countries, it is a ban that forbid smoking in all public places. Despite of depriving smokers of their freedom, I agree with that policy strongly.This damages their health against (corrode) their will and could cause them lung cancer.Therefore, it is a constructive idea to ban smoking in public places.