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Should drugs be legalized in china?
发布时间：2014-10-18 15:51:02 作者：陈环宇 发布者：214031013 浏览次数：3551 类别：英文作文
[大学五年级] 山东省 >> 青岛市 >> 城阳区 >> 城阳街道
As far as am concerned,the drugs should be legalized in China.First of all, if someone who is addicted to harmful drugs,it's difficult to extricate himself.Secondly, the drugs are more expensive, and can make someone lost all of his wealth. Finally, the drugs will make social instability and affect national security.Thus,the drugs should be legalized in China.
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As far as I am concerned,the drugs should be legalized in China.First of all, if someone who is addicted to harmful drugs,it's difficult to extricate himself.Secondly, the drugs are more expensive, and can make someone lost (lose) all of his wealth. Finally, the drugs will make social instability and affect national security.Thus,the drugs should be legalized in China.
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