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should euthanasia be carried out in china?

发布时间：2014-10-18 15:52:35 作者：张继旭  发布者：zhangjx2088 浏览次数：3232  类别：英文作文  

    For those patients who can never be cured, death is unavoidable to them, euthanasia be carried is the best way to let them get rid of the great pain. Firstly, these patients have to suffer from the pain, at the same time, their family members have to stand the burdens economically or mentally. Secondly, to reduce the pain of the patients is one of the doctor's duty, so euthanasia is moral. To be frank, everyone has the right and freedom to manage their own final destiny, such as the freedom of choosing to die.

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  For those patients who can never be cured, death is unavoidable to them, euthanasia be carried is the best way to let them get rid of the great pain. Firstly, these patients have to suffer from the pain, (a lot) at the same time, their family members have to stand (load)the (mental and economic) burdens economically or mentally. Secondly, to reduce (Reducing) the pain of the patients is one of the doctor's duty, so euthanasia is moral. To be frank, everyone has the right and freedom to manage their own final destiny, such as the freedom of choosing to die (the way to dying).