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The first month of my university school

发布时间：2014-10-19 14:43:37 作者：佘文慧  发布者：a12327 浏览次数：2971  类别：英文作文  

   

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  When (After) I paced into Anhui Normal University ^{for more than}  one month ago, I felt (feel) happy and a little disappointed. Not only did I become a true college student, but also I intended to improve myself. Consequently, in the back of four years ,(during the four years) I will try my best to purse my dream.

  To start with, our fundamental task is the military training which all freshmen will experience^d. Although it gave us so many pian (most of us suffered a lot),I didn't regret joining (taking part in) this exercise (activity).By this drill, I saw a lot, I realised that I should smile to every day, rather than the complaining.

  Then, we commence to take our courses. The situation (atomosphere) totally changed. It is boring, but I stick to it. I clearly saw my disadvantages in math. So I begin to use my free time to practice (do exercises) and make preparations for my studying math (the coming courses).Gragually, my life became fulfilling again. In addition, I was so lucky that I was admitted to (by) the student union. In this group, I meet many interesting classmates ^{who have various intrests and personalities} and make friends with them. And I have acquired at student union is that only by show confidently yourself can you be noticed by others.

  On (In) the whole, I am looking forward to living a colorful and meaningful campus life. And I do believe that my student union's work will assist me to get (gain) that kind of campus life.
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