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shopping online

发布时间：2014-10-19 16:23:05 作者：庞成琴  发布者：1558668793 浏览次数：2713  类别：英文作文  

  As far as i am concernd,shopping online is so enjoyable,the resons  for this are as follows,

  first of all ,the web-stores can keep customers updated about the best selling products,so that they can buy something they really like in time,In addition.when the online stores make a discount.they can get things quickly and do not need to wait on line,Secondly,they can provide customers with a wider range of choices .by which customers can buy something with less money,How a exceting thing.Thirdly,it is very convenient and time-saving,For example,more and more people are busy during the day ,However,they are free at night,so it is the best choices for them to shopping online

    All in all,it is so convenient and enjoyable to shopping online

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  As far as i am concernd,shopping online is so enjoyable,the resons  for this are as follows,

  first of all ,the web-stores can keep customers updated (updating) about the best selling products,so that they can buy something (what) they really like in time,In addition.when the online stores make a discount.they can get things (goods) quickly and do not need to wait on line,Secondly,they can provide customers with a wider range of choices .by which customers can buy something with (spend) less money,How a exceting thing.Thirdly,it is very convenient and time-saving,For example,more and more people are busy during the day ,However,they are free at night,so it is the best choices for them to (is) shopping online

  All in all,it is so convenient and enjoyable to shopping online