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"The count of monte cristo" journal entry

发布时间：2014-10-21 13:06:56 作者：朱红福  发布者：114114 浏览次数：3169  类别：英文作文  

"The count of monte cristo" is mainly about the 19th century a man named Edmund was the chief officer of the tang dynasty when the captain, was between 2 of the er and lover's brother phil south frame, at he and his partner's wedding was grasp to go to trial, and as a result of jobbery villefort took over this case, the tang dynasty, was sentenced to more than 10 years of imprisonment.Prisoners in prison, he met a priest, in talking to the priest's, he won the rebirth, and have the wisdom and wealth.After prison, he was renamed the sailor first mountain, return those who have mercy on him, and then changed its name to the count of monte cristo began his revenge plan.In the way of revenge, in the end, all the sinners were punished.Put themselves in thought, if I encountered him, I will take vengeance, but that's not the hand of god, but a vengeful angel, is the hand of the god of death.
The count of monte cristo to dare to love dare to hate, he sincerely friendly to his friends, will not relent on the enemy.But he also compassionate, kind of miss villefort and her grandfather, though a family of four enemies, but he help and let them get happiness.Although Heidi is a chess pieces in the earl of revenge, but who is to say she is not happy not happiness!And finally the earl gave up hatred, he also got the true love
Perhaps as ding ling said: "the people as long as there is a kind of faith, seeking something, what hard endure everything, what can adapt to the environment."Life did not so, countless times fall, countless climb up again.Frustrated by the small distressed people, will choose to give up, think of the count of monte cristo!!!!The count of monte cristo told elector Maximilian in a word, let me remember: "it doesn't matter neither happiness in this world, unfortunately, there is only one and another conditions, that's it. Only experienced extremely unfortunate people, to taste the extreme happiness. Until god hangs allow for human to reveal came before that day. The vision of the future of all human wisdom is contained in four word 'hope' and 'wait'."Read this sentence, the understanding of life would be a deeper layer.
Monte cristo finally have a good ending, but the wicked are evil, makes a good man to get happiness: pretty good Greek girl Hattie melted monte cristo cold heart, earl again with a new hope.There's a phrase in reading at the end of the book gave me a profound revelation: life can not live without hope, life of struggle we can not live without wisdom.
One's life does not experience wind and rain, how see rainbow, as long as forever toward the front, you will be more and more close to the goal, put the eye always farthest, make oneself of the life without any regret.The life always has bitter and sweet.As long as constantly surpass themselves, challenge yourself, your dreams can come true.Optimism is a passionate beautiful march, always inspire you and enterprising spirit of enterprise

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  "The count (Count) of monte (Monte) cristo (Cristo)" is mainly about the 19th century a man named Edmund ^who was the chief officer of the tang dynasty when the captain, was between 2 of the er and lover's brother phil (Phil) south frame, at he and his partner's wedding was grasp to go to trial, and as a result of jobbery villefort (Villefort) took over this case, the tang dynasty, was sentenced to more than 10 years of imprisonment.Prisoners in prison, he met a priest, in talking (Thanks) to the priest's, he won the rebirth, and have the wisdom and wealth.After prison, (that) he was renamed the sailor first mountain, return those who have mercy on him, and then changed its name to the count (Count) of monte (Monte) cristo (Cristo) ^then began his revenge plan.In the way of revenge, in the end, all the sinners were punished.Put themselves in thought, (in their opinions) if I encountered him, I will take vengeance, but that's not the hand of god, but a vengeful angel, is the hand of the god of death.
  The count (Count) of monte (Monte) cristo (Cristo) to dare to love dare to (and) hate, he sincerely friendly to his friends, will not relent on the enemy.But he also compassionate, kind of miss villefort (Villefort) and her grandfather, though a family of four enemies, but he help and let them get happiness.Although Heidi is a chess pieces in the earl of revenge, but who is to say she is not happy not happiness!And finally the earl gave up hatred, he also got the true love
  Perhaps as ding ling said: "the people as long as there is a kind of faith, seeking something, what hard endure everything, what can adapt to the environment."Life did not so, countless times fall, countless climb up again.Frustrated by the small distressed people, will choose to give up, think of the count of monte cristo!!!!The count of monte cristo told elector Maximilian in a word, let me remember: "it doesn't matter neither happiness in this world, unfortunately, there is only one and another conditions, that's it. Only experienced extremely unfortunate people, to taste the extreme happiness. Until god hangs allow for human to reveal came before that day. The vision of the future of all human wisdom is contained in four word 'hope' and 'wait'."Read this sentence, the understanding of life would be a deeper layer.
  Monte cristo finally have a good ending, but the wicked are evil, makes a good man to get happiness: pretty good Greek girl Hattie melted monte cristo cold heart, earl again with a new hope.There's a phrase in reading at the end of the book gave me a profound revelation: life can not live without hope, life of struggle we can not live without wisdom.
  One's life does not experience wind and rain, how see rainbow, as long as forever toward the front, you will be more and more close to the goal, put the eye always farthest, make oneself of the life without any regret.The life always has bitter and sweet.As long as constantly surpass themselves, challenge yourself, your dreams can come true.Optimism is a passionate beautiful march, always inspire you and enterprising spirit of enterprise