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the effects of advertisements on people's life

发布时间：2014-10-25 21:11:12 作者：高维蔚  发布者：十八半夏 浏览次数：3697  类别：英文作文  

In present-day society, where is thick with commercials and advertisement, people can hardly find a place where is totally free from ads, not even in schools or a science fiction. So, how do people feel about living in a world of advertisements?

Some are positive to them. Ones of them regard ads as visual enjoyment that shows creation, passion and innovation to anyone who watches it. And some another think ads are informative. They advertise the products by fascinating stories or amazing MVs in which the usage of products can be completely shown. It’s convenient for those who want to purchase one to select.

However , there’s more people who hold negative attitude toward ads. they think advertisements that interfere into our life are badly disturbing. People read ads unwillingly every day, on the way to school or work, on the massive Internet, the new-arrived magazines and everywhere. Ads have already overrun. But why those people are so upset with ads, just because the existence itself? Maybe it’s because some ads are dirty .And more likely, when someone is reading an ad, he or she may think ‘why must I waste my time reading this ad that shows a ridiculous product that I will absolutely not buy it in my whole life!’

Well, as a matter of fact, whether you accept advertisements or not, they have already penetrated every corner of our life. All we can expect is that there will be a more and more clean environment of advertisement.

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  In present-day society, where (which) is thick with commercials (commerce) and advertisement, people can hardly find a place where (that) is totally free from ads, not even in schools or a science fiction. So, how do people feel about living in a world of advertisements?

  
  

  Some are positive to them. Ones of them (They) regard ads as visual enjoyment that shows creation, passion and innovation to anyone who watches it. And some another (others) think ads are informative. They advertise the products by fascinating stories or amazing MVs in which the usage of products can be completely shown. It’s convenient for those who want to purchase one to select (selcet one and purchase it).

  
  

  However , there’s more people who hold negative attitude toward ads. they think advertisements that interfere into our life are badly disturbing. People read ads unwillingly every day, on the way to school or work, on the massive Internet, the new-arrived magazines and everywhere. Ads have already overrun. But why those people are so upset with ads, just because the existence itself? Maybe it’s because some ads are dirty .And more likely, when someone is reading an ad, he or she may think ‘why must I waste my time reading this ad that shows a ridiculous product that I will absolutely not buy it in my whole life!’

  
  

  Well, as a matter of fact, whether you accept advertisements or not, they have already penetrated every corner of our life. All we can expect is that there will be a more and more clean (cleaner and cleaner) environment of advertisement.