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The national day

发布时间：2014-10-28 16:09:16 作者：赵彩云  发布者：每个黄昏和黎明 浏览次数：2951  类别：英文作文  

The national day

   The national day means a lot to chinese, It is a public holiday for the whole countr.Meanwhile,It is aiso a good time to have a good rest,We can pian to travel during this short holiday ,For most students,we have seven days off.

During the holiday,I just stay at home .That made me feel so boring .Then i saw a film called "Dearest".It tells about the parents who lost their children.The parents tried their best to find their kids.They believe they can find their kids one day.

Parents are the people who love us best ,However,we often complain about them,We can not understand they do so much fou us,We must learn to live with independence .Our parents will stand behind us forever.

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  The national day

  The national day means a lot to chinese (is meaningful for Chinese).It is a public holiday for the whole countr.(country).Meanwhile,It is aiso (also) a good time to have a good rest,We can pian (plan) to travel during this short holiday ,For most students,we have seven days off.

  During the holiday,I just stay at home .That (It) made me feel so boring .Then i saw a film called "Dearest".It tells (told) about the parents who lost their children.The parents tried their best to find their kids.They believe they can find their kids one day.

  Parents are the people who love us best ,However,we often complain about them,We can not understand ^what they do (have done) so much fou (for) us,We must learn to live with (be) independence .Our parents will stand behind us forever.