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• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2014/10/28 19:13:07
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  The year (day) is the annual National Day on October 1.Our school takes off seven days .I don,t plan ^to go home and I stay up days in (stayed at) school .I visited  some places in Chengdu .I had a good time.                                    In the morning ,I waken (woke) up at 7：00. I took the bus to Chengdu Chunxilu .It was crowded with people .I saw some different people (foreigners).I fed (felt) happy .                                                                                      In the afternoon ,I went to some famous places .There were some interest sites and some delicious food .I talked with visitor .visitor give (gave) me some interesting  information.                                                                            I felt full and (was) happy. I learn (learnt) some thing during The National Day.I had  a good time