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A person who impressed me

发布时间：2014-11-03 20:53:32 作者：pjy  发布者：pokawing 浏览次数：7634  类别：英文作文  

       To most of people,she is an ordinary woman.But in my heart,she is the greatest woman,who I love most and impressed me most.

My mother was always strict with me when i was little.But she also gave me freedom so i can decide how to spend my free time as long as I finish my homework.I felt I was so lucky because she didn’t force me to take many classes which I wasn’t interested in while other children have to take these classes.What’s more,she has brought me to countryside where I can not only enjoy the idyllic scenery but also experience how toilsome is a farmer who cultivate in the field.

My mum has taught me what is right and what is wrong.When I make mistakes,she would point it out and tell me what to do.But I didn’t always listen to her even contradicted with her when I was at a little age.Maybe she would be angry but she has never given up teaching me and never treat me with cold violence.

She is so special to me and has great influences on me.She is my unique mother.

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  To (For) most of people,she is an ordinary woman.But in my heart,she is the greatest woman,who I love mostly and impressed me mostly.

     My mother was always strict with me when i was little (young).But she also gave me freedom so i can decide how to spend my free time as long as I finish my homework.I felt I was so lucky because she didn’t force me to take many classes which I wasn’t interested in while other children have (had) to take these (those) classes.What’s more,she has brought me to countryside where I can not only enjoy the idyllic scenery but also experience (witness) how toilsome is a farmer who cultivate in the field.

    My mum has taught me what is right and what is wrong.When I make mistakes,she would point it out and tell me what to do.But I didn’t always listen to her even contradicted with her when I was at a little (in my early) ages.Maybe she would be angry but she has never given up teaching me and never treat me with cold violence.(rudly)

    She is so special to (for) me and has great influences on me.She is my unique mother.