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Challenge

发布时间：2014-11-10 20:04:17 作者：陈蓉  发布者：shrri 浏览次数：3461  类别：英文作文  

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  批改时间：2014/11/11 9:00:38
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  Nowadays, many college students tend to be more and more realistic to their lives. they (Their) pursue (targets) ^are to ^have a stable and high salary ^{which isn't very high}, thus they live their lives without dream and enthusiasm.Some people say that it is a good life style for them.they have more time to do what they want, but others argue that we should choose a job with promising future.

  I believe that choose (choosing) a job with promising future is very important to us.First, more and more people choose ('s choices are) civil servants, because it is (they are) stable for them, they have stationary salary and time for them , this life is good to be realistic.actually, as a young people wo should choose a challenge job, we have clear goal to fight for (atempt).second, having a goals often make us work harder. third, choose (having) a job with promising future can give us enthusiasm, wa can always be red-blooded and work as if we are never tired.

  Therefore, we should not give up our goals and try our best to achieve it.