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发布时间：2014-11-12 23:23:42 作者：老是卡也  发布者：老是卡也 浏览次数：3352  类别：英文作文  

Dear friend,

   I,on behalf of students' union,want to extend my sincere welcome to you.I am so glad that you have chosen our university to continue your education.

   In order to make your life here easier.I would like to provide you with some suggestions.To begin with,there is one of our students' union department especially for foreign students,in which you can learn experience from other international students quickly.Besides,international students are hard to get used to the different culture of China at their first time here.Making some Chinese friends,by my reckoning,will be a good way to relieve culture shock.

   What's more,if you want to travel around the city and see something different,I am here for you.You are free to contact with me in case of any problem.

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  批改时间：2014/11/13 19:07:28
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  Dear friend,

     I, ^amon behalf of students' union,^and want to extend (express) my sincere welcome to you.I am so glad that you have chosen our university to continue your education.

     In order to make your life here easier.I would like to provide you with some suggestions.To begin with,(In the beginning) ^{I will say that} there is one of our students' union department especially for foreign (exotic) students,in which you can learn experience from other international students quickly.Besides,international students are hard to get used (acostumed) to the different culture of China at their first time here.Making some Chinese friends,by my reckoning,will be a good way to relieve culture shock.

     What's more,if you want to travel around the city and see something different,I am here (waiting) for you.You are free to contact with me in case of any problem.