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You and I

发布时间：2014-11-15 15:53:52 作者：袁菲娅  发布者：1690424515 浏览次数：3106  类别：英文作文  

       How  time  flies ? what going it is ? Today ,   I missed you very much when sit down the front of the windows , I  have already growed up ,I don't know if you have a happy life and in a good condition ,July ,We are going out the school  with a diffenent  dream  and diffenent destination. coming in and going out the Zjut , I  haven't been keeping a good state and a relaxing mood , I  think about a people's life and what I do ? I immeersed in a bad mood , I don't konw what I do ? I saw the sky everyday out of my breath, I find it is for us to improve my moody and  make me relax, 

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         How  time  flies ? what going it is (is it going)? Today,I missed you very much when ^I sit down ^at the front of the windows , I  ^{realized that I} have already growed up ,I don't know if you have a happy life and in a good condition ,July ,We are going out (graduated from) the school  with a diffenent dream and diffenent destination. coming in and going out the Zjut , I  haven't been keeping a good state and a relaxing mood , I  think about a people's life and what I ^will do ? I immeersed (immersed) in a bad mood , I don't konw what I ^can do ? I saw the sky everyday out of my breath, I find it is for us to improve my moody and  make me relax,