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Advantages of online shopping

发布时间：2014-11-22 21:06:52 作者：郑水娣  发布者：2796535772 浏览次数：13300  类别：英文作文  

With the development of the Internet  online shopping is more and more popular among people, for shopping online is convenient .Online shopping has many advantages ,some reasons why online shopping  so popular are as follow.

First people can buy goods without leaving home and people can choose the goods that they like as long as they can .Besides the sellers will arrange some special wokers to deliver the goods that people buy to their door which is more convenient for people than going out to buy goods.

Second the goods online are abundant and people have more chance to buy the best goods.What`s more people don't have to waste a lot of time and energy to go from one shop to another to choose what they like.

Finally people don't need to bargin with the sellers when shopping online.Also when they meet some sellers who are rude maybe they will with each other while shopping online can avoid it happen.

In a word online shoppong can give people the most covenient in their life and  they have kinds of goods to choose.Therefore people like buy goods online.

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  With the development of the Internet  online shopping is more and more popular among people, for shopping online is convenient .Online shopping has many advantages ,some reasons why online shopping ^is so popular are as follow.

  First people can buy goods without leaving home and people can choose the goods that they like as long as they can .Besides the sellers will arrange some special wokers to deliver (send) the goods that people buy (bought) to their door which is more convenient for people than going out to buy goods.

  Second the goods (commodities) online are abundant and people have more chance to buy the best goods.(merchants) What`s more people don't have to waste a lot of time and energy to go from one shop to another to choose what they like.

  Finally people don't need to bargin with the sellers when shopping online.Also when they meet some sellers who are rude maybe they will with each other while shopping online can avoid it happen.

  In a word online shoppong can give people the most covenient in their life and  they have kinds of goods to choose.Therefore people like buy goods online.