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This is me

发布时间：2014-11-24 19:17:09 作者：钟惠琳  发布者：zhl123456 浏览次数：2510  类别：中文作文  

Hello,everyone！My name is Zhong HuiLin.I"m a middle school student.I"m 13 years old! First,let me tell you something about my life.In the morning,I often get up at 6:00.It's early,isn't it?After,I bresh my tooth,it make my tooth become health.And my breakfast at 7:00.Then,I go to school.My school -Wangmudu middle shool ,it is the best school,because it has the best teachers and the smartest students.I like English,it's interesting,it is different from my Chinese.English changed my life.This is me,I hope to be an English teacher one day.

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  Hello,everyone！My name is Zhong HuiLin.I"m a middle school student.I"m 13 years old! First,let me tell you something about my life.In the morning,I often get up at 6:00.It's early,isn't it?After,I bresh (brush) my tooth,(teeth) it makes my tooth (teeth) become health.And my breakfast ^isat 7:00.Then,I go to school.My school -Wangmudu middle shool ,it is the best school,because it has the best teachers and the smartest students.I like English,it's interesting,it is different from my Chinese.English changed my life.This is me,I hope to be an English teacher one day.