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          Parents Are My friends
        Parents always love their children,but sometimes they're too strict with them. Consequently,many kids hope that parents could be friends with them.
        In my family, however, my parents are my friends. My father and I often go ^out for a walk together，and he always tells me some funny jokes to make me laugh. Both of us like playing sports. Sometimes we play basketball on the playground. Although he plays better than me, he often helps to bring out the best in me with great patience. So I'm making more and more progress in basketball playing. Besides, my mother is a good listener whose face is always with a smile that could easily melt my little heart. Moreover, she does take good care of me all the way and helps me with my studies as well as my daily life. We share everything willingly as the best friends ever as you might imagine. In fact, they're not only my dearest parents but also my best friends.
        Our parents who give our lives are as well trying to give their lives to us so as to guide us to grow up joyfully and meaningfully. So I think it most important that we love them deeply in return. Let's make friends with our parents!