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My Hometown

发布时间：2014-11-26 18:29:42 作者：钟惠琳  发布者：zhl123456 浏览次数：3325  类别：英文作文  

Everyone have their hometown ,they always think themselves's towns are the best place.When those place from poor to become rich and more beautiful,their hometowns can become famous.In fact,I also love my town. I'm only a middle school srudent,but I hope to my hometown can make more people knows.However,my hometown have many buildings,it's fantastic.Though my town is only a small village,I don't care about it's big or small,because it isn't important.I like bule sky and cute animals.Our supermaket is YueKeLong supermaket,it's the biggest supermaket.My school is TaoJiang school,I like my school and my teachers ,I think my teachers are my friends,And you?Do you like my hometown?Welcome to here,I'm sure aboue my town in soon,it can become better.

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  Everyone have their hometown ,they always think themselves's towns are the best place ^{to live in}.When those place ^{which are}from poor to become rich and more beautiful,their hometowns can become famous.In fact,I also love my town. I'm only a middle school srudent,but I hope to my hometown can make more people knows.However,my hometown ^also have many buildings,it's fantastic.Though my town is only a small village,I don't care about ^thatit's big or small,because it isn't important.I like ^the bule sky and cute animals.Our supermaket is YueKeLong supermaket,it's the biggest supermaket.My school is TaoJiang school,I like my school and my teachers ,I think my teachers are my friends,And you?Do you like my hometown?Welcome to ^be here,I'm sure aboue my town in soon,it can become better.