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Online Shopping

发布时间：2014-12-02 19:57:36 作者：李琳琳  发布者：******** 浏览次数：3304  类别：英文作文  

In recent years,more and more online shopping are appeared to the public with a large number of enthusiasm. Beside it's also required that the econmic was abundanted.

As online shopping became a fashion. Univesity students play a significantrole in taobao,taobao officed a business platform for indoorsman and female otaku, which they can make them hand to cloose they wanted. Therefore,online shopping have a kind of type. According to the taobao webisite, they can find themselives favorite. however, some people argue that the online shopping is convenient for them life, In addition,online shopping also producing lots of problems. for example, the merchant's no intergrity, when examine goods was satisified. merchant taing ignore and so on. This problem always aroused quarrel.

In my opinion. I am absolutely in favol of this practice. The reason lies in the fact that online shopping saving our time so that we can do other things. In a word, I hope all people when they online shopping  can them find the most suit goods.

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  In recent years,more and more online shopping are appeared to the public with a large number of enthusiasm. Beside it's also required that the econmic was abundanted.

  As online shopping became (has become) a fashion. Univesity students play a significantrole in taobao,taobao officed (provides) a business platform for indoorsman and female otaku, which they can make them hand (freely and convenient) to cloose they wanted. Therefore,online shopping have a kind of type. According to the taobao webisite, they can find themselives (their) favorite. however, some people argue that the online shopping is convenient for them life, In addition,online shopping also producing (causes) lots of problems. for example, the merchant's no (is not) intergrity, when examine (checking) goods was satisified. merchant taing ignore and so on. This problem always aroused quarrel.

  In my opinion. I am absolutely in favol of this practice. The reason lies in the fact that online shopping saving (saves) our time so that we can do other things. In a word, I hope all people when they online shopping  can them find the most suitable goods.