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Blackboard-Writing or PowerPoint

发布时间：2014-12-03 21:25:05 作者：王乐  发布者：123789 浏览次数：4278  类别：英文作文  

   Powerpoint has already very popular all over the world.It is said that having class has become very easy because it is covenient for the teachers to teach each student,but not enough,blackboard-writing can give the students a more direct ways to display the essue.

   As far as I am concerned, blackboard-writing is the better ways to suit the students' study. For one thing, powerpoint is more faster than blackboard-writing ,but it also can give the students more misunderstands,however, the blackboard-writing is a better ways to show the students the knowledge the teachers teaches. For another, It is not a good idea to replay the knowledge after class and not benefit for their study to understand. If having a opportunity to show the students more knowledge by the teacher, powerpoint was a good ways to suit the students study. In real life, most students is sleeping when the teacher who uses powerpoint has a class. Although powerpoint has become widespread in English teaching,it still has some problem to solve.

    In a word, blackboard-writing is more suitable to the students than powerpoint in my opinion.

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  Powerpoint has already ^become very popular ⁱⁿ all over the world.It is said that having class has become very easy because it is covenient for the teachers to teach each student,but ^{it is} not enough,blackboard-writing can give the students a more direct ways to display the essue (put forward their questions).

  As far as I am concerned, blackboard-writing is the (a) better ways to suit the students' study. For one thing, powerpoint is more faster than blackboard-writing ,but it also can give the students more misunderstands,^{(for example,...)} however, the blackboard-writing is a (much) better ways to (in) showing the students the knowledge the teachers teaches. For another, It is not a good idea to replay (review) the knowledge after class and not benefit for their study (them) to understand (conprehen their courses).If having (there is) an opportunity to show the students more knowledge by the teacher, powerpoint was (will be) a good ways to suit (march) the students study. In real life, most students is sleeping (are asleep) when the teacher who uses powerpoint has a (in) class. Although powerpoint has become widespread in English teaching,it still has some problems to solve.

  In a word, blackboard-writing is more suitable to the students than powerpoint in my opinion.