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views on keeping pets

发布时间：2014-12-09 18:48:01 作者：杜闻佳  发布者：dddddd 浏览次数：4363  类别：英文作文  

    On account of the increasingly expansion of the city, exchanges and contacts between people is becoming less and less while keeping pets is becoming a trend.So, there is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a hotly debated topic today.
    There are some advantages of keeping pegs.First of all,pets can be good companions, which is especially important for those who live alone and the old who can not get out much.Secondly, keeping pets helps mankind understand animals' world and develop positive feelings toward them.What's more, taking care of a pet also helps children to be responsible and caring members of the society,which is in favour of the development of our society.
     However, some others who don't keep pets always complain about that the pets whose owners live in the same area as they live usually make them scared and annoyed.Also,some dangerous pets are mence to their nearby residents for their body-borne viruses，and its excrement also can destory our environment sometimes.
     In my opnion,one should fully assess their own capabilities and various aspects of environmental factors, and then decide whether to keep pets.

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      On account of the increasingly expansion of the city, exchanges and contacts between people is becoming less and less while keeping pets is becoming a trend.So, there is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a hotly debated topic today.
      There are some advantages of keeping peg (pet)s.First of all,pets can be good companions (friends), which is especially important for those who live alone (lonely) and the old who can not (seldom) get (goes) out much.Secondly, keeping pets helps mankind (men) understand animals' world and develop (forst) positive feelings toward them.What's more, taking care of a pet also helps children to be responsible and caring members of the society,which is in favour of the development (construction) of our ^harmonioussociety.
       However, some others who don't keep pets always complain about that the pets whose owners live in the same area (room) as (so) they live (are) usually make them scared and annoyed.Also,some dangerous pets are mence to their nearby residents for their body-borne viruses，and its excrement also can destory (interupt) our environment sometimes.
       In my opnion,one (people) should fully assess their own capabilities and various aspects of environmental factors, and then decide whether to keep pets.