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发布时间:2014-12-23 14:40:43 作者:may  发布者:zzzq 浏览次数:1888  类别:英文作文  
[非在校学生] 四川省 >> 成都市 >> 金牛区 >> 茶店子街道


I have to admit that things begin to get out of hand, because more and more people know the insider business information which they are not supposed to be known at this moment. I don’t know who can be so imprudent to control all of these things. Whaton earthdoes he want? What triggers him to sacrifice the benefits of shareholders? Does their company have some financial problems? Why does he want moneythis badly?That does it, all the efforts to guess who he is are unavailing. Because the information we can get is too limited that we can’t do any predictions about the person or institutes who have done some insider trading. It is not uncommon to see the share price fluctuateevery now and thenduring the annual general meeting of shareholders. But when every time signals revealing that one director will be changed in advance have been leaked during the meeting, the share price will fluctuate violently. I have to say it is a little weird. In fact we have been through a very tough time,we never had such a bad dayin our career life. Wehave never gone so long withoutproviding valuable information to our clients. Therefore we missed several important business chances we wanted to grasp.

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    I have to admit that things begin to get out of hand (control), because more and more people know the insider business information which they are not supposed to be known at this moment. I don’t know who can be so imprudent to control all of these things. What on earth does (did) he want? What did triggers him to sacrifice the benefits of shareholders? Does (Did) their company have some financial problems? Why does (did) he want money this badly?That does it, all the efforts to guess who he is are unavailing. Because the information we can get is too  (so) limited that we can’t do any predictions about the person or institutes who have done some insider trading. It is not uncommon to see the share (sharing) price fluctuate every now and then during the annual general meeting of shareholders. But when every time signals revealing that one director will be changed in advance have been leaked during the meeting, the share price will fluctuate violently. I have to say it is a little weird. In fact we have been through a very tough time,we never had such a bad dayin our career life. We have never gone so long without providing valuable information to our clients. Therefore we missed several important business chances we wanted to grasp.

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