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my eng lish teacher

发布时间：2012-10-14 20:36:14 作者：乔秀可  发布者：qiaoxiuke 浏览次数：3710  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

My ｅnglish teacher is miss feng.she has long har.she is big eyes ,she is likes music and Chinese..she is quiet ,she is tall and thin .she is a smart , she is a university.she is very funny.

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/14 21:48:43
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  My ｅnglish English teacher is miss feng Miss Feng.she She has long har hair.she is She has big eyes ,she . She is likes music and Chinese.she She is quiet ,she . She is tall and thin .she is a smart , She is smart. she is a university. She is a university student. she She is very funny.

  Come on!Qiao Xiuke.

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2012/10/15 10:32:12
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  My ｅnglish（English） teacher is miss feng.she has long har.she is big eyes ,she likes music and Chinese.she is quiet ,she is tall and thin .she is a smart , she is a university.she is very funny.

• 批改教师：郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
  批改时间：2012/10/15 13:33:42
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  My ｅnglish ^{（English）}teacher is miss^(Miss) feng.she has long har.she is big eyes ,she is likes music and Chinese..she is quiet ,she is tall and thin .she is a smart , she is a university.she is very funny.

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  乔秀可，请注意英语文章的格式。句子开头的字母要大写。好好整理一下，作文太乱了！

• 批改教师：王爱云 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇语文备课组 >> 三年级 )
  批改时间：2012/10/15 15:17:40
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  My ｅnglish ^Englishteacher is miss feng^{Miss Feng}.she ^Shehas long har^hair.she^She is ^hasbig eyes ,she is likes music and Chinese..she^She is quiet ,she is tall and thin .She _^is a smart , she is a university^student.she is very funny.

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2012/12/4 22:33:55
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  My ｅnglish (English)teacher is miss(Ms.) feng.(Feng)she has long har(hair)she is ^andbig eyes ,she is likes music and Chinese..she is quiet ,she is tall and thin .she is a smart , she is a university^student.she is very funny.

   Do you like your English teacher ? Pay attention about your spelling .