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My famliy

发布时间：2015-02-01 16:16:00 作者：颜丙艳  发布者：2280588212 浏览次数：2988  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

    My father is a worker.He workes very hard and he goes to work by bus.He likes watching TV.My mother  is a worker,too.She goes to work on foot.She likes reading stores.I am a student .I often come to school on foot.I like reading stores and watch TV.Ilove my famliy

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      My father is a worker.He workes very hard and he goes to work by bus.He likes watching TV.My mother  is a worker,too.She goes to work on foot.She likes reading stores.I am a student .I often come to school on foot.I like reading stores and watch TV.I love my famliy